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[arcanetrivia]

I am... at a loss.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3904707/Falling_for_a_Prince

What the fuck?

I mean, seriously, what the fucking fuck?

It took me three readings just to puzzle out that Severus = "Prince Lani of Kezor", the "elve".

404 Brain Not Found *zzzt*

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[jillypooh.livejournal.com]

That is so spectacularly bad it's not even funny. And somebody left a positive review. *headdesk*

[arcanetrivia]

Did they? There weren't any reviews when I saw it in my feed. Oh my.

[helen99.livejournal.com]

"Swish. Whoosh. Swweeeesh. Clang. Thump thump thump. Clang clang clang clang. Thump. The sounds of their training echoed through the white abyss."

Oh my. .... .... .... BWAHAHA!!

[arcanetrivia]

Perhaps they just learned about onomatopoeia.

'course, I think I learned about that in grade school...