Actually I do require both. If you'd like to, I'd welcome the help.
I don't generally need SPAG help except inasmuch as I have a tendency to overuse certain words and to use ten words where five would have done, and in pointing out the inevitable "you may think this is clear since you're the author and know what you're trying to get at, but it's befuddling to the reader" kinds of phrasing.
In this case I am worried I have bitten off more than I can chew WRT the plot itself, as I have never tackled anything as long as this is likely to get, and need help with "while all the stuff I showed you was happening, this other stuff I didn't actually show you was also happening" layers.
I asked about this one about a month ago but of course everyone was deep in the mire of holiday fests and not really having open schedules at the time. Lack of response was partly why I gave up and starting posting it, heh. (I've posted everything I've written so far.)
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I don't generally need SPAG help except inasmuch as I have a tendency to overuse certain words and to use ten words where five would have done, and in pointing out the inevitable "you may think this is clear since you're the author and know what you're trying to get at, but it's befuddling to the reader" kinds of phrasing.
In this case I am worried I have bitten off more than I can chew WRT the plot itself, as I have never tackled anything as long as this is likely to get, and need help with "while all the stuff I showed you was happening, this other stuff I didn't actually show you was also happening" layers.
I asked about this one about a month ago but of course everyone was deep in the mire of holiday fests and not really having open schedules at the time. Lack of response was partly why I gave up and starting posting it, heh. (I've posted everything I've written so far.)