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some kind of snark faery ([personal profile] arcanetrivia) wrote2008-03-30 04:08 pm
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ow, my brain.

I see that the sun is setting down it was be about

Six or seven but all that I think about what just happened it roam my brain and does not seem to

Stop the way that her face looked with no motion.



O.o er.

It's kind of like a haiku, if you squint...


I sent that one off to babb since it's all written like that. English that takes expenditure of Willpower points to figure out, line-breaks in random places, capitalization after line-break even when it's in the middle of a sentence, haphazard use of quotation marks that makes people appear to be speaking their actions aloud, etc.

I can't figure out why everyone thinks the title OC, Isabella Evans, is the image of Lily, since apparently she has black hair. Points for having her be Harry's cousin through a more distant relationship than usual, though (Lily's uncle, I think it was, or even great-uncle). Cooking up relatives in places of the family tree that were left utterly unmentioned is a lot less offensive than having her be Petunia's daughter would have been.