Another good typo:
'Lucius? Lucius Malfoy?' he asked as Snape's eyebrow rose steadily into his back hair.
Wow! That's limber, even considering that I think he's supposed to be somewhere in his twenties at this point.
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Date: February 27th, 2008 10:02 am (UTC)From:...Snape has back hair? Ew. I always figured him at only medium-hirsute.
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Date: February 27th, 2008 07:41 pm (UTC)From:no subject
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Date: February 27th, 2008 07:44 pm (UTC)From:Still I'm amused at the image of Severus with two black caterpillars over his eyes.
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Date: February 27th, 2008 04:38 pm (UTC)From:I never pictured him as furry either, you would think James & Co. would have teased him about it if he was. Oops! Logic!
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Date: February 27th, 2008 07:48 pm (UTC)From:Or we would have heard comments in Harry's narrative voice or something, yeah. I've wanted to use this defense sometimes when I see people saying odd things like Snape smelled bad, or whatever. Surely, if he did, we would have heard about it at some point from Harry, Sirius, or James. (For that matter, I'm not sure when or if the word "ugly" is actually used. We get a lot of harping on individual features, but that specific word? I don't know. It's one of my many snipe hunts I need to get around to.)
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Date: February 28th, 2008 01:15 pm (UTC)From:snape has some awesome mobile eyebrows there. ^______^