Another good typo:
'Lucius? Lucius Malfoy?' he asked as Snape's eyebrow rose steadily into his back hair.
Wow! That's limber, even considering that I think he's supposed to be somewhere in his twenties at this point.
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Date: February 27th, 2008 01:16 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: February 27th, 2008 07:44 pm (UTC)From:Still I'm amused at the image of Severus with two black caterpillars over his eyes.